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Will anyone Try?
« Thread Started on Apr 24, 2007, 3:41am »

I galloped around on my strong pillars, and my huge body move gracefully for my size. I then reared upon my legs, and whinnied, when I came back on to all fours. I snorted. I stood on still, my long and thick mane gracefully sitting on my neck, moving ever so often in the wind, then I flicked my long thick tail, that also moved ever so often in the wind.
I held my large tiara up, and with one of my listeners prick forward, and the other one back. I was also very fast for my size.
The feathers on my hooves, where blowing in the wind. I snorted.

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Re: Will anyone Try?
« Reply #1 on May 1, 2007, 4:39pm »

This large frame couldn't go unnoticed. She was a contrast to the greenery that was spread about the lands here. The multi-colored steed was immediately brought up into a regal trot, covering the ground quickly. She was a draft, rising quite high, but Zinfandel was large as well. It was not because of his breed, but he was born very tall. But his bloodlines did compliment the height. His stature, being as tall as it was, was indeed fitting for bringing in more of the mares, but it did not make up for his many flaws.

Lining his alabaster hide, were massive blotches of jet black, tainting his otherwise pure hide. And crossing the underside of his jugular were the teeth marks of an equine. But the scars did not stop at just his neck. They were spread randomly across his entire figure. They were a proof of his long life lived and his multiple encounters. But the flaw that would always, both physically and mentally scar him, would be his left void. It was a smoky light blue, almost white even. Yes he was blind in that eye. But that physical scar was nothing to him. The story behind it was hard not to forget, and he was full of shame for what he'd done. The hideous pool was always covered by his thick forelock. He was sure to keep it hidden until he had already proved his leadership. Then, maybe his herd members would find out. But he didn't want it to persuade them to turn him down.

He drew up a good three yards from the burly femme, stomping his flints as he stopped before giving a small snort and quieting himself.

"Zinfandel, vixen."

He spoke with a sort of boredom, quite tired of going through the same speech every time he met a new temptress. But if he waned his herd to flourish, it was only necessary for him to do so.

He waited patiently, his nape arched in a very noble manner. After all, this femme was in a land where the stallion's were in charge. If he chose, he could snatch her up right into his herd. He wondered if she realized this.

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Re: Will anyone Try?
« Reply #2 on May 2, 2007, 5:09am »

I caught the stallions scent before I saw him. I pricked both of my listeners forward for a bit, but then I put on of the back. I watched him for a while. I saw that he was had lots of scars on him. I was glad that my most of me was very dark.
I saw that he was tall, but could he tell I was not a pure draft?
When I hear him speak I pricked both of my dark listeners forward. It took me a while to answer, when I did answer, I had kept both of my listeners picked forward.
Nice to meet you, I think. Magic May, that’s my name.Then my jet black fringe fell over, my dark orbs. I kept my jet black tail down, so it was nearly touching the ground. I sort of new where I was, so I was trying to kept my tail down.

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Re: Will anyone Try?
« Reply #3 on May 4, 2007, 2:17pm »

Pools took glances around the terrian... even though he be a light, his herd needed more mares, so even to capture, was in his complete leage. Sod peirced with the sudden stabs of his daggers, pillers gained their crimpson monique as he came fourth... their be another brute already here.. Guess it's time to mingle, and take the mare anyways. Whipcord gave violent whips at his flanks, but eased with the sudden tempation of the hocks, just relaxing at them... no stress so far. Approaching with low caution, Concordance feared not many, let alone of the other alliance.

Appearing fourth, Concordance realized whom the other brute was... the Neutral King, as himself the Light Lord, he knew this would be interesting. A quick shake of the pelt gave his sorral apperal the glimpse of his apperance, showing the femma of his kindness towards her, yet he still was here to capture under will... odd for the lights, but ever so tempting. Speaking Clearly, his voids came fourth to the vix, no mind was held towards the Neutral:

"lo vix, the calling is Concordance, the Light Lord... I see you have already met the Neutral"

Comman curtisy was nothing compared to his hatred of the other brutes in which ruled over diffrent lands.. if it where up to Concordance, he would rule them all... and one day he will. Confidence and pride showed as he gave a short glance at the Neutral king, Zinfandel, but no stress, or incovidence showed, or was felt. For a miniute the Light Lord thought of the mares nervousness to be standing here with two brutes in which had no liking to one another, and where both after the same mare... and both had a great deal of power. Looking at Zinfandel, his harsh lyrics spoke to him:

"Why am I not suprised you are creeping here Zinfandel? Then again... half the stuff you do never suprises me... why don't you go to your terrian, and leave the femora here, then no problems will occur"

Was he expecting Zinfandel to just back down with a few words spoken? No, actually far from that, but he was expecting to intrege the brute, or just watch him try and shrug it off. Giving a slight smirk, he would even fight for this dove... even if he hardly knew her.. just to show the Neutral King that he could... or could he? Complete cofidence was held in himself, as he awaited the comback, or the ignorance of ignerance from Zinfandel, yet he also awaited the femma to speak easily, and to him.

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Re: Will anyone Try?
« Reply #4 on May 5, 2007, 1:42pm »

(( ...This could very well swirl into a very good plot for this site with the light king. I'll message you what I'm thinking! Could be very exciting and might bring in some more members. ))

Zinfandel heard the brute's approach and flicked his auds back and turned his head to the side, so that his one good pool might find the approaching stag. And when his gaze met with that chocolate colored steed, he broke in a devilish smirk. "Ah, so the light king wants to dance?" As Concordance approached he stomped a fore impatiently and raised his nape regally, looking to Concordance with disgust. He remembered what that arabian had said to him. Sahara was her name. Her words never ceased to plague him. In his mind, a torrent of rage was brewing for this unruly King. He did not deserve his place as King. He had no wisdom nor did he give even a seconds thought to his action.
Obviously he didn't think about his words either...

"Why am I not suprised you are creeping here Zinfandel? Then again... half the stuff you do never suprises me... why don't you go to your terrian, and leave the femora here, then no problems will occur"

His orbs burned with a fiery rage. He could not contain it but venomous words managed to creep between his clenched jaws.

"Are those fighting words? You are fighting for a vix of another alliance. She follows beneath me, foolish brute. What would she have to do with groveling over you, a disgrace to this very empire?"
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"And if it's a fight you're here for, you can guarantee you'll leave here maimed, and your herd, liberated."

He smacked his tail against his hocks, the tips barely reaching the dusty floor. He slammed a fore and tossed his massive skull. His muscles tensed as he awaited some sort of blow or call of fight. He glanced to May with a concerned glance as if asking for her to back away. He knew this could very well end in death, but he was very willing to fight here. To bring this brujo down to his knees.

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Re: Will anyone Try?
« Reply #5 on May 5, 2007, 5:07pm »

I looked at the new stag when he came in, but I wasn’t really bothered by him. I keep my dark orbs on Zinfandel.
When I heard the new stag speak. I didn’t say anything accepted I snorted at the word light.
I kept my listeners pricked forward. If they are going to fight, I’d rather not watch.
When Zinfandel glanced to me, I then moved back a bit. Still watching Zinfandel. I then thought why does everyone think I’m a light? Well I don’t like them or darks. I thought to myself. I knew in my head and heart that I would never go with a light, if I did have to go, I knew I could cause trouble. I then walked out of both of their reach, but still in sight.

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Re: Will anyone Try?
« Reply #6 on May 6, 2007, 6:00pm »

Each stride seemed as though unfair, but deffinatly balanced amoungst his withered beats. The Earth seemed to travel onward no break in the dust, just pure hatred curessed his willingmeant to survive. Deapths seemed to leap from his orbs, as if his pools had a never ending posture, stature unknown to the human, yet somewhat femma's gaze. Soon the audit's recieved a striking message, of what seemed to a Neutral, and a Lights comeback to one another. Though their was a sent of three, the only matters where the brujo's, in whom scared one another, with lyrics untold. For a moment passing by with just a shake of the shoulder seemed to be an honest remark... but truth be told... he lusted off the others anger to one another. Spears turned their timemeant amoungst the Earths face, and onward he took lengh like strides towards them, giving him an advantage to be seen.

Appearing fourth, he slowed his pase to a halt, just watching to two bicker over the fae before them, one whom seemed as if a Neutral as well. Giving a sputtered bewildermeant, the notice of the two, gave the apparel of the Neutral King, and the Light Lord... fugers, the two couldn't talk to one another to save their lives. Vix seemed to tense, and orbs bewildered at the distrubance, but none the less, Cadence had no attention towards them, nothing bothered him about the situation. Cold laugh came remorcly through his withered voids, as he just shot the piercing sowrd of harsh gazes at the two, love seemed to travel afar. Vocals came through the tonsals, leaving himself into mockering of the beats:

"Whats this? Two lonesome kings whom had no choice but to recieve a vix under will? Look at her, she spares interest very little, yet you two seemed to have no reason to back down"

Dial just racieved the vocals easily, nothing bothered him. Not even heartbreak. Innocents showed between them all, yet the Neutral had to much to spare for his anger, thrusting it upon the light... poor savages... niether to know their doings are fatel. Giving a pretend glance at the femmora, he just grinned at her, was she really going to choose between brutes like such? The two act like dogs, hungary all the time, but when fed, no grace comes about. Does Cadence want the mare? No. Her unworthy meant had already showed just by watching her, but the lust to entertain himself with a few voids was irresistable. Shaking his locks a few whips, he held his posture, and awaited the brutes sayings. Though one more void was to curress his mug:

"Pathetic"

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Re: Will anyone Try?
« Reply #7 on May 6, 2007, 9:22pm »

Dial turned to see a shadowed brute come fourth, presents shivered the air. Orbs gazed at him for a moment, as he begane to speak, just listening. sonars gave the apparel of ones distrustmeant. Snorting to his remark, Cadence was deffinatly more hated then Zinfandel... the farthest alliance away from him. Though, a feeling came fourth, that one day Cadence could mean much, though nothing right now. Pawing at the hround with his dagger, a smorce remark sputtered, then was said:

"A reason to back down, has no reason at all... therefore, the better of us, will remain strong for whom we wish"

Just glaring at him for a few moment, the word of discouragemeant, and ager of a void came fourth ...Pathetic... Snorting again, Sonars pinned, and the wild flashing of his whipcord striked his lfanks in fury, whom was he to say his words to? No place ta all... Cadence was deffinatly one whom knew how to speak to those easily, making it hard to speak back, but when words are found to fight back, life becoems easier...

OOC: low muse! but i thought i minds as well reply since it is my turn! lol! anyways, will get back online later!

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Re: Will anyone Try?
« Reply #8 on May 9, 2007, 7:03pm »

Zen's stare was immediately turned to find the owner of the thuds that rumbling across the Earth. Their father, a black friesian. The Dark Lord. Zinfandel didn't batter a lash. Even with those venom-soaked words that Cadence had spat at the two of them:

"Whats this? Two lonesome kings whom had no choice but to recieve a vix under will? Look at her, she spares interest very little, yet you two seemed to have no reason to back down"

His voids merely narrowed, but he was yet to retort with more word. With crania raised, he snorted, thinking of the very meaning of this newfound leader. The fight between both the Light and Neutral could only be brought to its end with this Dark's help. Zen was out to stop this rumored rise that Concordance was possibly planning. He assumed this Dark King had not been around long enough to meet and converse with anyone to get anything that Zen had received about the future of the empire.

"Pathetic"

His cool-headed atitude remained. Words could not break his defense. He would not lift a hoof because of a mere word. Whatever Cadence thought, his thoughts were not made with Concordance's possible plan involved. Why fret?
He prepared to respond, but the bay beat him to it:
"A reason to back down, has no reason at all... therefore, the better of us, will remain strong for whom we wish"

"Useless." A waste of breath really. Zen broke in before either could offer any other remarks.

"I'm not here to fight for this mare. I do find this light's want for a neutral mare quite unreasonable, but if he wishes her, than let her be judge here."
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"Reason to back down? Submit to this fool?...Do as you will, dark, but I do not give in so easy."

His one visible void stared at the onyx frame, waiting for him to give a remark of some sort. His face radiated a great defiance as he stood before the both of these rulers, knowing that if Concordance sought an ally, the darks and lights would be the last to form an agreement. They were opposites. And this wasn't magnetic pull where opposites attract...This was of greater complexity.

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Re: Will anyone Try?
« Reply #9 on May 9, 2007, 11:30pm »

Audit's pricked in the direction of Zen... fool? Well, well, well... isn't someone a little irriable? Giving a snicker to his marks, I listened on in mockery of him, as he spoke... whom was he to say? Like he be a judge. Whipcord entrained his hocks with slashes, wells orbs remained their gaze... this pathetic brute Zen... well he has his place. Giving a slight shift to the light, he seemed to have fair cofidence, and had no desire to back down... though neither did the neutral, they for sod not see they had trapped themselves in this mare's mind-games. Did they really not see that she had droven them into a world of which entertained whom they very hate? Me, a dark... thats who it entertained... the lust for anger, and fury was within him, which Zen and Concordance fed him easily. Listening to the Neutral speak again, he finished...

"Reason to back down? Submit to this fool?...Do as you will, dark, but I do not give in so easy."

Just like a neutral.. never knows when to shutup. Always stubborn for their will... let's just say Zen was an easy target for regretfulness, but let's just leave that settle, only an amature will weep over the fact of words. Snickering again as it neared his turned, he found it fun to speak to them, they seemed to know exactly his aquatiance. Mug peered with a slight grin as he spoke, loving the attention the brutes had.... So the light wanted the mare, so what? This is the capturing grounds, she has no say whom she goes with... maybe they need a reminder:

"Zinfandel... you entertain me eagerly... almost like you try. Do you not se these are not the claiming lands? These are the capturing lands, and that ensue's, that the mare has no choice in whom she goes with"

Laughing a bellowing laugh at the end, the mockery seemed to never end. Sides gave that crimpson lowered appeal, wells pelt just siezed to take in the dust, and feed off it. Orbs awuatic and capturing, giving them temptions easily. Why did these brutes even want her? She was only causing mischieve... a mare with a craine could realize when she isn't wanted, and even though these two wanted her, she wasn't really wanted... just a pleasure fae... Giving a smierce remark, he sneered to the vix:

"You may hate to hear this darling"

Circling her, just barly pelt brushing, just giving the impercination of likliness... though he had no attempt to even considering bringing her home... though it could be amusing. Thinking for a few moments, he then started out again, speaking into her sonar, whispers gave a slight tingle to the ear, though he had to admit... this was a good tempting alliance, giving him the idea's of reassurance to her. Finishing his sentance to her, he said:

"But these brutes mean nothing... just... like... you..."

Would she be offended? Maybe, but that was the joy. Stepping back, another laugh came through, just seaping for the attention... he loved it... the fae maybe did not like it, but so what. Raching the light king, he just eyed him, orbs gave that firey burn, speaking to him, he gave a spitting approach, wells taunting:

"You... you may be good... but your attempts will never slip..."

Walking to the neutral, only one word filled through him. Speaking his voids harshly, crimpson leaked htrough his nares, as they flarred with tempermeant... Knee's buckled, giving him that muscular appraoch... no... not trying to scare the kid... just breath through him. Voids sparked, yet gave that bitter appeal, saying with a distance mind:

"You Zinfandel... you have your place... so stay with it, and stop trying to be something your not... cause you will never be whom you want"

What did that mean? Well, Zinfandel will have to figer that out all on his own... it's words of meaning, words of destiny... wait... was it a code... it was.... but the code is not easy, and when time comes, it will be revealed... expecting an outrage, Cadence stepped back to his stature, just giving that grin of appeal. Squaring up to his poitential, he gave a light like look, yet always covered with his really apperance. Orbs deep and inferred... not litterally, just with the anger, and anxiety he always showed. Keeping contact with each brutes gaze, he nearly shooed the fae... no time for her, this was a talk between the brutes now... she will be needed later, but not now... not even close now... but... she could still speak, if she wishes... but to Cadence, most of the irritating lyrics will be ignored.

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Re: Will anyone Try?
« Reply #10 on May 10, 2007, 8:44am »

I watched as a new brute came in I snorted. I knew very well where I was.
I snorted at the dark stallion.
Why would I care what you say?
I then walked over to Zen, and brushed my body against his body. Then I moved a bit way, but just in Zen's reach, and sight.
Well I can tell you that if a dark takes me I will cause chaos. I snorted.

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